At first I thought "Premium Membership" was a bit too long for the bar to sustain, then I realized it's has better definition than "subscription" itself...these are what I've found:
subscribe
verb [I or T]
1 to pay money to an organization in order to receive a product, use a service regularly or support the organization.
2 SPECIALIZED to offer to buy something or pay an amount for something as part of your business activities:
subscription /səbˈskrɪ p.ʃən/
noun [C] (INFORMAL sub)
an amount of money that you pay regularly to receive a product or service or to be a member of an organization. (Cambridge Advance Learner Dictionary)
a sum of money given or pledged as a contribution, payment, investment, etc. (Dictionary.com)
At least it's better to change "subscription" to premium membership somehow...but there are two things I don't think it's good to be there, which is the word "needs" next to it and the name of the membership donor:
Seriously, what is dA to say everyone here "need" subscription? I am not trying to say that getting a premium membership is a bad thing or a waste of money, but saying someone "needs" something is like as if you understand him so well that you have the power to decide their need and such? What's wrong with a "member" written on there? Besides for the reason it looks 'bland' and that's it. Most people know that it's your gallery that matters, not how colourful or shiny you decorate your page (I don't know if there are exceptions), so even though with "___ of Premium Membership" and "Member" won't look strange at all...
About the name of the donor, I don't know if people would like to have their name on it as if they should be thanked and grateful for donating PM(premium membership)...there are people who'd like to keep their name anonymous, but in the end, this one is not a really bad problem compared to the "need" PM thingy mentioned above.
Well in the end, saying someone "needs" something is pretty rude (Unless under some circumstances, it's needed for your studies or whatever, like textbook which your teacher might as you to purchase), especially on business (Try imagining going to a bazaar and all those sellers rushed to you with their goods saying "Hey, you need these!" while you never think of buying anything. I don't know if there are such tactic that saying someone needs something would arouse their curiosity and get a PM, but for those who are sure they don't need one, "need" used in that place is indeed rude...unless we could remove it.) and *coughcoughcoughpreacherscoughcoughcough*...uhm...excuse me. Anyway, that's all I'd have to say about something I notice. I could be wrong in some facts but all of these are my personal thoughts.
Also, exam was ended, so I could finally rest for about two weeks, if I am indeed resting than working on something else.










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